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it's clear that you gave your emotions to this song, and that's how music should be! about expressing feelings, and you've nailed it. As long as you can have this relation with the music that you create you will always nail one of the most important aspects of music.
try to EQ this song better, learn how to manipulate synths and sound and you are on your way to make good music with the special kind of sensitivity that you have.
Hope to hear more from you.
cheers!

w0lv3rine responds:

this song is actually pretty old. closer to when I first got into fruity loops, but I totally agree. I could've equalized it way way better than what it was and I could've chosen a better variety of instruments. but thanks for the criticism, its always appreciated

this is amazing! very well done!
love the vocals, and the guitar, its beautifull!

quadx responds:

Thanks for the feedback. Glad you like it

nice work!
cheers!

This is good! i think you just have to control the voice cuts better.
sometimes they sound, how i can i say...like they were chopped and that's it...like there's nothing more to do with this vocal samples... i'm just saying that they should be more smouth troughout the mix.
you have here a good idea/ concept.
try to match the vocals better with the instrumental tempo, sometimes it looks like it's out of tempo.
what music program are you using? you can easily match the vocals with the beat if you are using ableton live.
You can find good tutorials explaining how to do it.
if you nail this technic you can make of this a good and interesting mix.
i definitely love this idea.
Pm me when you have this song done, i want to hear it.
cheers!

johndisk0 responds:

Hey! Thank you very much for this response. To be honest, you are the first really constructive critique I have received over all of my songs. I had to cut the song together vocally phrase by phrase. Usually I take the music and mix it into the words, but this time I had to go the other way around to get the timing right. "We built this city" is so fast and syncopated that I couldn't cut it the way I usually do and that was my challenge. I use Goldwave and a Metronome App on my iPod and that's it. Everything else is done by ear. I will look in to Ableton for help with the timing, so thanks for the recommendation! If I get around to revamping it for a more pro-style sound, I will definitely hit you up with a PM. Thanks again! -jD

it sounds good!
it has a nice groove!

Good song! i actually like it sounding as it is.
the pan as it is gives some low fi beauty to the song.
love the choirs.
nice work!

This is great! everything is in its place.
it's a very well developed video game song.
very addicting!
Nice work!

yeah, the audio got a little bit low....
but you can easily fix it.
The song's great! very beatifull and a bit sad...the composition is good, very well developed.
I would love to have such sensitivity to write something so beatifull as you did.
Great work!
Cheers!

Good work! very beautifull ambient sound.
You should do more songs of this genre.
cheers.

BlackParchment responds:

Can I remix your Blue Lover?

It's very good man!
Love how the melody grows throughout the song, and the drop is very epic!
great work.
cheers.

Lone-X responds:

Thanks for the awesome review!

Peace and love,
Lone X

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