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I think that your song has a good structure.
I really like the samples that you used.
The melody is interesting and it is very well developed troughout the song, it grows good.
I like the intro, i think it songs good with the "you will taste defeat" line.
I just don't understand the bass line starting at 00:17.
The bass line is good, but in my opinion, (and its just my opinion...because everyone got their own taste...) i don't think that the distortion used works good troughout the song.
I tried to hear your song with 2 different headphones and what i found was that at 00:43 (at the song's buildup) you just hear noise. I don't know if that noise was your point, but it gets annoying to hear, because the song's composition is really good and then you just kill it with all this distortion.
It's not easy to equalize a song when you work with synths that are heavily distorted, i know that by experience, but we have the mission to find out how to control this kind of issues if we are trying to make music.
Try to equalize the song and you'll have here something really cool.
At least i can see that you have good, really good potential.
Work it out! :)
Cheers.

Zuelo responds:

Thanks alot for the helpful review, i will work more on this on the weekends :)

I agree with the bass line i think the reese bass is to heavy on this track.

Man, i can understand why you say "Please don't trow it down a ditch..."
One thing that i can clearly see here at newgrounds is that everyone seems to care only about dubstep songs and / or hip hop.
I think that this is the kind of thought that trows down some real good artists around here that create ambient, electronic, classical music.
Just because this genres don't seem so trendy as dubstep nowadays seems to be it's not a reason for not wanting to listen this kind of genres around newgrounds.
Your song's great!
Love it from beginning to end!
It's pure and beautifull, i like the synths and the song progression.
I'll always hear and contribute with my reviews to this genre around here!
Dude, you got 5 star and fav because your music deserves it.
cheers!

dicennian responds:

Thank you, truly. :)

i love it man! It's Blue lover's big brother!
Love how you turned it so dark and still very dreamy!
Amazing work!
Thanks!
Cheers.

The drum line sounds interesting.
You definitely got to work hard on the structure of this song, you should try to build and define each part of the song.
I have noticed that around 1:28 your main synth clips a bit, this happens because of the equalization that you have to work aswell.
You have some interesting characteristics in this song, i like the bass line and some of the glitchy effects that you created.
I think that if you work out the main "problems" that i pointed in your song you'll have something good in the end.
I started producing music very recently and one of the things that helped me a lot was to download a good music edition program. I'm using ableton live wich is great, i recommend it because it's very intuitive.
Then i started to consume, and by saying consume i mean i did an intense search, of all kinds of music tutorials around the internet.
Plus i've tried to learn everthing that i could about music production and music theory, this helps a lot. I've done all this using what the internet could give me, and believe it or not, you can find all this easilly and learn by yourself everything you need. Am i a good producer? No i'm not, but in 5 months i have learned a lot, and i'm having good reviews around here.
What i mean is that you have something here, you dont need to have lots of music experience, you just need to have the will and curiosity to know more then you know.
I sense in your song creativeness, i think you just need to get a bit more music information to turn out awesome around here.
I believe in you.
Pm me when you have a new song, i want to hear it.
Cheers.

seph976 responds:

Thanks for the feedback, music is just something im trying to get into on the side, so i dont make or work on it a whole lot, but i recently started up again and im trying to come up with something a little more original, if i get it finished il send you a PM.

Very good music.
the intro and chorus kind of remembers me of the old sega saturn games like "nights" or "sonic R" ost.
it's very cool man!
Epicness should be the name of this song! ;)
nice work!
cheers.

ZEROzxCROSS responds:

ha ha thanks those games have really good osts

This song has a lot of characteristics that i loved.
it's a good song, very well composed and somehow catchy.
nice work!

moobella responds:

Yaay thank you :D

This song sure deserves 5 star!
the composition is awesome, very fluid.
All sounds are beautifull and very well equalized.
It's a clean an fresh inspirational song.
Nice work!
Cheers.

SuperGoodSound responds:

i'm really pretty surprised at the score... i don't think i've EVER had a piece rated that high after around 200 plays :O

It's very nice.
You have good quality.
I like what i heard here.
Cheers!

This is weird...but very experimental, and i like that.
Nice work.

This is very good!
Nice guitar rifs and voice. i like your sound, and specially the epic cowbell! :)
Every song gets better when you use a cowbell, thats what les from primus says. ahaha!
Nice work dude! Very well done.
I'll fav you.
cheers.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thanks very much, dude. Super glad you dig. Moar Cowbell!

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