Nice song!
I like how it develops troughout the 02:49 minutes.
Very epic and cinematic, could fit perfectly in a movie soundtrack or in a video game.
Love the strings ensemble at 01:46, very well mixed together.

I actually like your song.
It has some weird synths wich turns the song very interesting.
Obviously it looks like you were bored...because the song is very simple in structure and melody.
But i like how it sounds, it's easy listening.
I think its always good to re-work our tracks specially the ones we do when we are bored.
Since the main synth line of this song is so catchy it would be nice if you used it in a serious work.
I don't really liked the bass synth, but that's just a matter of taste...Though I like the melody of it.
The arpeggios, apart from sounding so awesomely weird, are cool ! They give character to the song.
I think that sickness and boredom made you create something very interesting this time. Ahah! :)
Nice work.
Cheers.

I think the song starts well.
The intro sounds nice with the piano line and the synth growing at the same time.
Yet I think that the piano line would sound better if it was more fluid and organic, it sounds too electronic in my opinion.
The biggest disappointment in your song for me is the drum line.
you have your kick audible , thats ok, yet your snare is very low.
But i think that opinions always differ when the subject is "drum EQ"...
I like the synth that you used at 02:07, nice sounding one!
I think your composition is good, strong and simple.
The music grows in an interesting way.
I love your transitions, the break downs and buildups that you made are strong and very inteligent.
You sure have good skills. :)
You did a good work.
Cheers.